Hip Hop Forum

Posted: **Fri Feb 09, 2007 5:31 pm**

Within My Mind My Thoughtz Are Seperated,One Side Carez
The other Fuck it i Hate Him!,Onez an Angel tha Other a Product
Of Satan,Equiped With a Talent to bring Hate-In Many Shapez
Kidz Sick They Say,'Vocalz Dont Click' So he Spit Insane,Shit
My Mindz Twisted i Cant Excape it,So i Face it Blazein Im Crazy
Face Me And I'll Break Thee,With a Fatal Arrange Of Flowz Aimin
Demonic Speaches Increase Tha Sequence Steamin-N-Seakin
Seein that Ya Brain Stemz 'Wiltz' N Startz Leanin N Leakin...

Posted: **Fri Feb 09, 2007 5:36 pm**

its a nice piece man, but your structure all off wack homie

Posted: **Fri Feb 09, 2007 5:36 pm**

oh yeah and you needa link...........

Posted: **Fri Feb 09, 2007 5:38 pm**

http://illestlyrics.com/board/comin-out ... t3594.html

Posted: **Fri Feb 09, 2007 5:53 pm**

thanx man

Posted: **Fri Feb 09, 2007 6:34 pm**

No Prob Homie

Posted: **Sat Feb 10, 2007 4:27 am**

Kidz Sick They Say,'Vocalz Dont Click' So he Spit Insane,Shit
My Mindz Twisted i Cant Excape it,So i Face it Blazein Im Crazy
Face Me And I'll Break Thee,With a Fatal Arrange Of Flowz Aimin

^^ those lines stuck out for me, it was nice - seems like you gotta lot of heart

Posted: **Sat Feb 10, 2007 4:51 am**

Thankz For tha Feed...Appreciate it

Hip Hop Forum

Random Shit

Random Shit