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Within My Mind My Thoughtz Are Seperated,One Side Carez
The other Fuck it i Hate Him!,Onez an Angel tha Other a Product
Of Satan,Equiped With a Talent to bring Hate-In Many Shapez
Kidz Sick They Say,'Vocalz Dont Click' So he Spit Insane,Shit
My Mindz Twisted i Cant Excape it,So i Face it Blazein Im Crazy
Face Me And I'll Break Thee,With a Fatal Arrange Of Flowz Aimin
Demonic Speaches Increase Tha Sequence Steamin-N-Seakin
Seein that Ya Brain Stemz 'Wiltz' N Startz Leanin N Leakin...
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its a nice piece man, but your structure all off wack homie
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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oh yeah and you needa link...........
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thanx man
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No Prob Homie
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Kidz Sick They Say,'Vocalz Dont Click' So he Spit Insane,Shit
My Mindz Twisted i Cant Excape it,So i Face it Blazein Im Crazy
Face Me And I'll Break Thee,With a Fatal Arrange Of Flowz Aimin


^^ those lines stuck out for me, it was nice - seems like you gotta lot of heart
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Thankz For tha Feed...Appreciate it
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