Random drop

[~*Blitz*~]

http://illestlyrics.com/board/post22875.html#22875

Now its time to open ya eyes, Yup.. Sammy's here with a surprise, the innocent girl was a disguise, and stepping back I would advise, My fingers and this keyboard are my only supplies/
And I bottled up the hate, feeling the depths of anger like its my soul-mate, I'm sick of being feed bullshit like I over-ate, Stop acting hard like you grew up in Section-Eight, and I don't want your feedback this aint a public-debate/
I didnt drop this to see whatcha had to say, Matter-a-fact you fuckers can look-away, I'll still make my point like its discovery-day, And my lyrics will leave you dead - left to rot and decay/
And while I'm at it - fuck you emcee's, Would you quit actin like you gotcha lyrical degree, And lemme add that beefin with me, Is like eatin the fruit from a poisionuous tree, I'm sweet but you can guarantee, I'll leave you keeled over on ya knees/
Gasping for air and pleading your last prayer, You gotta better chance surviving in ah electric chair/
My talent is precious, It's summin you'll never be possesin, I hope you're wearing armored-protection, Cause these bars is pefection/ (lol)
And nothing you say is hurtin me, So to the newbies on this site - sit back and learn from me/
I only listen to myself, Fuck wat the rest of you is sayin, Cuz I smoke you bitches like my weed, Just for fucken entertainment!/



Yes Yes I know it was scattered but I'm still really new at this and am practicing my ass off!

[Lawgix]

H-A-R-D gangsta as shit girl!!!!!! thats my lil sis droppin the heat man!!!!!!! WHEW i started sweatin while readin this... but it was a great drop i see lots of improvement!!! keep it up darlin!!!!!!!

peace

ILU!!!!!!!

[~*Blitz*~]

you're a dork lol, but thank you for the feed =) go me! and btw before anyone asks we have no relation ;p but phill thanx for lookin out <3

[Momeijah]

LoL Uh-Oh!!! Lmao Good Drop Overall, Got The Point Across Nice n Sharp, And Btw Are u And Lawgix Related?? Lmfao Jk

[LadySam]

wooooohaaaaaa go sammmy! loved it

[-TraMaTiK-]

My fingers and this keyboard are my only supplies/

tru 4 everyone who texts^

And while I'm at it - fuck you emcee's, Would you quit actin like you gotcha lyrical degree, And lemme add that beefin with me, Is like eatin the fruit from a poisionuous tree, I'm sweet but you can guarantee, I'll leave you keeled over on ya knees/


sum lyrical Adam & Eve shit lmfao...^^

hot tho no doubt...n who said u cud do it? UH HUH...lol nice drop saMMy,get @ me later -1-

[Haz]

Dis Wus Pretty Hard Bodied

And nothing you say is hurtin me, So to the newbies on this site - sit back and learn from me/
I only listen to myself, Fuck wat the rest of you is sayin, Cuz I smoke you bitches like my weed, Just for fucken entertainment!/

^^ i Lyk'd Dat Shi.. Propz Wid Diz One
Keep Droppin...

[Lawgix]

attention!!!! shes my lil sis... but not by blood... newayz that is all

[~*Blitz*~]

thanx for the feed back guys <3 much appreciated

[Viral]

nice shit...u came pretty hard wit it....good usage of words n wat not...some pretty good rhyme schemes...it was kinda everywhere tho...but keep it up...id like to see another drop...

[Mac]

Good Shit Sammy. Work On Your Structure, Well I'll Help You When I Talk To You Online Next. Over All This Was A Consistent Drop, I Don't Think It Ever Fell Off. Was Basic, But At The Same Time Complex Coming From Somebody Who's Only Dropped Single Digit Verses In Her Entire Life. Keep Droppin The Hot Shit Womannn.

[~*Blitz*~]

thank you boys! <3

[Borat]

No Problem haha

[~*Blitz*~]

and btw thank you to those of you who have been teaching me along the way, I hope your hard work is showing! lol

[>Urb@n-Leg3nd<]

Very Nice....

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And while I'm at it - fuck you emcee's, Would you quit actin like you gotcha lyrical degree, And lemme add that beefin with me, Is like eatin the fruit from a poisionuous tree, I'm sweet but you can guarantee, I'll leave you keeled over on ya knees/


Your Doin Good Keep at It