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Post by precise »

lol, i only got like three recorded songs, this is one of em, tell me watcha think, any tips or comments are appreciated. peace

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does no one reply in the audio threads?
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most of us have no speakers lol.. im just too lazy to "click there" and i probably already heard it
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i will listen soon.
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Post by complexity »

Well, personally i think a steady voice, is what you need to work on the most. It was a really fast flow, but i caught some really nice lyrics. And plenty of multi's. And you did a pretty good job staying on the beat. I just think your voice goes up and down a litlte bit, and changes, which does throw off the flow.

But it was pretty good to listen to. Keep up
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Post by precise »

thanks for the feed, i dunno i always try to change the pitch of my voice alot so that its not hum drum, but yea ill work on it thanks.
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yah i know what you mean
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You got ballz kid, keep praticing and you will get it. All It takes is time and practice.
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Post by Viral »

yea dat shits old man...lol u gotta def. got a new track goin.....dat way u can rip it up vocally......oh n fuckin finish dat beat already u lazy fuck so we can collab on it already!!..lol
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