lol, i only got like three recorded songs, this is one of em, tell me watcha think, any tips or comments are appreciated. peace
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Well, personally i think a steady voice, is what you need to work on the most. It was a really fast flow, but i caught some really nice lyrics. And plenty of multi's. And you did a pretty good job staying on the beat. I just think your voice goes up and down a litlte bit, and changes, which does throw off the flow.
But it was pretty good to listen to. Keep up
But it was pretty good to listen to. Keep up
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yea dat shits old man...lol u gotta def. got a new track goin.....dat way u can rip it up vocally......oh n fuckin finish dat beat already u lazy fuck so we can collab on it already!!..lol


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