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Ur robbing cradles? Damn dude.
You need to work on ur flow...you seem hesitant. Gotta get that hesitation outta ur voice and sound not only more emotional, but more enthusiastic about whut ur rappin about. To much FX on ur voice too. I suggest doubling up instead of adding effects. But fam...don't rob cradles in ur tracks...that ain't right. It'll make niggaz think ur the Michael Jackson of rap.
You need to work on ur flow...you seem hesitant. Gotta get that hesitation outta ur voice and sound not only more emotional, but more enthusiastic about whut ur rappin about. To much FX on ur voice too. I suggest doubling up instead of adding effects. But fam...don't rob cradles in ur tracks...that ain't right. It'll make niggaz think ur the Michael Jackson of rap.
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you need to get some rhythm asap, your flow wasn't working at all for me, your delivery as a whole needs work you lack emotion and charisma
you wanna captivate the listeners attention when they play your tracks, your barely held my attention for 4 bars
you may think its "hate" but everything everybody posted in here was pretty truthfull
you wanna captivate the listeners attention when they play your tracks, your barely held my attention for 4 bars
you may think its "hate" but everything everybody posted in here was pretty truthfull
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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