Slow Things Down

[>Urb@n-Leg3nd<]

A Track i Did a Lil While Back....

[Kurse]

Overall it's a decent track. One of the things that you gotta work on is your emotion. Your lyrics in a song can be fuckin incredible...but if your delivery is weak...it can kill your song sometimes. And that's one thing you definately wanna work on is your delivery. Come hard as hell wit it. Like in this track...if you holla'ring at a bitch...would you talk to that bitch all drab about it and emotionless!? Fuck no you wouldn't. You'd be spittin ur best game. And that's what you gotta do on a track. When you flow in the mic...picture that girl standing on the other side of it. Feel what you recite...know what I'm sayin!? The other thing you wanna work on a little is your double-up vocals. You were off on a few parts. I know alot of artists get excited as soon as their done writing and just wanna record right way. Don't. Take a few takes and familiarize youself with how you wanna spit the song and what particuliar words come in at a certain beat pattern or cue. Learn your song. After all...it is yours. If you fuck up on the back-ups...then just rewind a bit and re-record it. Shit'll never be perfect...but it doesn't mean you can't aim for perfection. But yea...work on ur double-ups. Other than that...the instrumental was hott and from a written standpoint...the lyrics are really good. Kinda gotta LL Cool J feel to it. Keep doin what you do fam.

[>Urb@n-Leg3nd<]

Thankz For tha Feed Back Kurse.....

[Kurse]

Anytime bro.

[Spoof]

Listening:

That lil computer voice sounds good lol your sound quality is aight but you need to clear it up a lil bit, beat is good and your rap flows well. And Kurse is right about the emotional part, otherwise this song's good!