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my first song

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heres my first song i made in my basement let me know if you like it!
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Yea my nigga...good basement muzik. I like this track...real good for it being ur 1st track!
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Dope shit man feelin tha beat
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thanks man!
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

If thats you then its dope man, nice flow and vocab. keep it up kid
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by StreetCreepa »

ye ye yo it kinda sound like sum1 firmilla Lmao but i ain't sayin shit *YET!!!*
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ay my apologies everybody my boy back in 99' told me he had made that beat for me i didnt even know cuz i had never heard the beat before!
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^^ .. Umm .. are U Sure Tha`s U Rappin` ??..
`cus U Text Skills Suck ..
But Audios is Nice ..
Don`t add Up ..
i Know it`s Two Different Things ..
But if Tha`s U Rappin` ..
U Should Be atleast Decent at Text ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..
JayGUNNa
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well im alot different now that was back in '99 i guess i lost it in your opinion!
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Duh .......
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thats why i asked if it was really you
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Post by Viral »

im feelin this no doubt...dope beat...feels old school thats for sure....stay up...
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Post by drunken jesus »

i really do hate shitting on tea partys but THIS WAS NOT MADE IN '99

that beats only like 3 years old if that lmao
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

somethins off on this song, i dont even think its that old dude...
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Post by drunken jesus »

heres the beat for whoever wanted it
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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