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Post by Street Pharmacist »

this is a story lol . just give me feed back on it,
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Hmm I'm Not Feeling THis At All, Can Barely Hear You at all, and The qaulity Is horrible, Right From The Start I Was Wishin it Would End, The Mixing in this is Really bad ...Sorry Man ..but That's Just My Opinion
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Post by Street Pharmacist »

lol okay this was a quicky did it in a rush.oh well
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Well That's Why You Don't Rush Yeah Shit, Cuz It'll SOund Like It Just SOunded ...Take Your Time Man, I'm Sure It'll Be Worth It At The End
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Post by complexity »

Please read the drunken jesus novel in general discussion

Here is a passage.

"Don't make excuses for why anything you write or record isn't up to its full potential, niggas don't care if your dog was dying and you only had 2 minutes to write your verse before you took it to the vet, excuses show weakness in character and confidence. No matter what the excuse is it won't make your material any better than it was when the listener/viewer first viewed"

I think you can get a lot better, just keep putting in work man
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Post by Subsist »

you got alot of potential. but fix your quality so people give a shit about listening and commenting really. the quality is bad , buy a new mic a new soundcard do somethina bout it u know.
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word^^ what subsist said
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