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When I'm at the ... Fuck it

Yo, I don't live battle now, have a think why
Bitches throwin panties got me cactchin pink eye
So I gotta watch my health, and I gotta stop the boozin
Cause the vodka got me smashin kids in my impala, cruisin
I think that Jessie J would be a very messy lay
When I slit her throat and fuck her vocal chords to take my stress away
She hit on me now I'm just fuckin wishin I banged her
So watch my anger issues make me issue out anger


I'm gonna punch myself in the eye with a Phoenix eye
And squeeze my iris with a vice grip cause it makes my penis rise
A deviant leavin my jizz all over a nurse's pores
At work where I fuckin murder whores in the birthing ward
So fuck off cunt you'll see me soon chasin your nan
Cause I got a handicap parking space in my pants
Clean my dick till it gleams, till your tongue is creamed with cum
I don't work in fast food but I'll stick meat between your buns

Peeeeaaaccccceeeeeee !!! All feed returned as usual.

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I like the flow on point the lyrics are dumb funny and alil scary as well

You did your thang even though its a bit psycho im not a judge of character im an evaluater of yalent and you got plenty
Be easy and keep dropping these mind altering pieces, peace

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I'm not really ever impressed with this style, as I find iteasy personally to find a random horror/sick rhyme to match up, but it's a cool little piece for something you never took too seriously.

Half-decent drop there, fun to read, the few multis were okay. The visuals were intense.

Lost my interest in the end because there's no coordination in your text, the ending leaves a shitty feeling that the hardcore shit wasn't thought out by a psychopath (aka a genius) but by a lunatic.

Good drop and rhymes but needs some serious re-working to make you come off as a lyricist and not a masochist

-- Wed Mar 28, 2012 2:55 pm --

Half-decent drop there, fun to read, the few multis were okay. The visuals were intense.

Lost my interest in the end because there's no coordination in your text, the ending leaves a shitty feeling that the hardcore shit wasn't thought out by a psychopath (aka a genius) but by a lunatic.

Good drop and rhymes but needs some serious re-working to make you come off as a lyricist and not a masochist

Lol @ masochist, damn.

Thanks for the feed everyone. Illizit I can't find anything to leave feed on for you so if you have anything just send me a link.

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