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probablyTreed
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Acid

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I bullSHIT in a freestyle or drop some real SHIT
in a MUSIC diaper
up to you to decipher the cyphers
wipe me down, or change it i dont give a shit
right now im focused on what i write down
makin you see how true sight sounds
dont trip, this aint acid brothers
im white but can you feel color?
do i make you feel dumber?
at least you feelin sumthin right?
on the edge of understandin
like sumthin that happened the other night
difficult recollection n fuzzy scenes
like hearin sum1 else explain they dreams
multiple re-directions
u lost 'cause u cant read directions
so pay the fee of attention
or ask MapQuest(ions)
on how to traverse the world
but most answers are unexplored
these r things u should ask the Lord,
FUCK do i know??
if elephants never forget ima rhino

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Re: Acid

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haha this was aight imo..i like where youve been going ..
and your concepts have gotten a bit more detailed since your arrival here..way to up ya game..

some people may want to see more multi's to make this more impressive..but i think its pretty descent for a play around script..

are you entering the audio Tourney?
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