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One last night

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one of those days so heres a freewrite its a little messy cause i just wrote and never went back just let it all go

another night grippin the knife wishing tonight could be the night i finnally end my life// bites of kryptonite the mirror is only hatrid in my sights//so i grab the knife i dim the lights and start to talk to god all polite// like why am i going thru this i cant do it imma lose it this is bull shit// im not tryin to be rude its. just a little old this depression aint exactly the coolest// whyd i have catch them bullets sorry if im sounding foolish but its bout time i do this// flashback of pain as i bleed out hatird spewing as i scream out feel nothin as its time for me to leave now//
Life is what you make it, thank god for making me creative,
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It's no secret that im a huge fan of dark writing, clean it up a bit and you wouldn't have yourself a bad piece at all, here.

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I like the piece for the fact your saying what you feel.
At the end of the day its good you put it in a piece and don't follow
through with thoughts you might have, keep it up
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FLowed perfect. Hope you got some more to write.
Staying alive and creative is a huge sign of strength.
Keep writing. thanks for posting
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