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Battle Scars(6th Mixtape Track)

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You Win Some...
attack with vicious words,and smack this gifted nerd
your shack will get disturbed,leave your brain split in thirds

ripping this coward is noth-ing, if u still exsist then your luc-ky
within this hour..chicken little is gonna beat the ugly duck-ling

can he win, it depends, if micz dead then yea when he ends
you gotta be a 50 fan how your fuckin wit so (many men)

so if life is like a game of who wants to be a millionaire this is your lifeline
but your like "Speak"..you fucked up the whole Lifetime*

follow the guide provided, kermit n ms piggy had me
but u came when me and your mom collided

your gone and recided, live on misguided
and lets not leave this battle like your sex..undecided

You Lose Some...
who hasnt dissed micz,he might as well have offered it, but ill gladly take his life
hes like 106& park emcees, he doesnt deserve to battle, with mics!(micz)

matchin me against you, i guess this site has no real threats
a couple queers left, but ur only so so, no where near def*

AIDs infected keys,take away the j and add whats next to f and t
infected the next emcee,we'd never be equal even if u were standin next to me

a mic for each crime, more pussy on this site than 16 dykes and 3 dymes
out of strikes, like baseball or 3 crimes, a mic for each time jay admired these rhymes**

your site is gettin nervous, stay in there only a couple lines left
dont spaz, but jay d, janet gave me a mic check***

But you live, you live to fight another day.

let finish this...

im known across planets,galaxies,countries, theres mics around cities
so hop off my dick bitch, u makin micz sound shitty
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Post by 8th »

Before posting a new topic, you MUST reply to ATLEAST one other topic and leave feed. And put that link in your new thread. And dont just leave feed like 'thats dope.'
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Post by 16 Micz »

shut up.
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Post by Street Pharmacist »

can he win, it depends, if micz dead then yea when he ends
you gotta be a 50 fan how your fuckin wit so (many men)

lol..
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Post by UN=con ditional Prophet »

ipping this coward is noth-ing, if u still exsist then your luc-ky
within this hour..chicken little is gonna beat the ugly duck-ling

i dont really understand this.

i think this sites dead but since you left feedback ima leave some to even out everything,

You Lose Some...
who hasnt dissed micz,he might as well have offered it, but ill gladly take his life
hes like 106& park emcees, he doesnt deserve to battle, with mics!(micz) can you do this? well obviously you just did.. i guess i dont get it cause i barely come on this site,

i like the concept of you win some you lose some, gotta stay level in the ego.

i think thats all the problems i have for this.. ima learn to be a better emcee by ordering stic.mans book about the art of emceeing then maybe i can critique better.. peace 1 love
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Post by complexity »

this site isn't dead, its just not overly popular
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Post by Viral »

yea not over popular at ALL!....i like verse posted tho
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Post by 16 Micz »

well thanks but these are actually battle verses i used in battles and where i say i win some, i won that battle, and where i say you lose some, i lost that.
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