new kid on d block

[ninenite]

Now everybody stand back, while I lace dis track wit anthrax, terrorism on dis riddim like rap from iraq, I use metaphors like swords, inna lyrical war, I launch missile after missile of encrypted thoughts,nukes are last resorts, its like I'm reluctant, u really have 2 push my buttons, press my back against the wall wen there's no more options, scream fuck em & launch weapons of mass destruction

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[CBK]

yo nice flow u got goin there man, its a lil short tho, also try an structure it better so it reads easier.

good post tho dude the lyrics were abit overplayed tho, try to be more unique with your concepts.

keep postin man

[Future]

yeah what he said short unstructured and played but other then that not bad

[COMPUTERCHIPS]

this was a cool start.
I would say write more and
like the others said, structure it
so people can read it better.
Keep writing.
peace