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Hmmm... Let's try something fresh...
Give it the thug's eye like 'You ain't a tough guy'
Then aim to succeed while measuring the cup size
Some sly dude bumps mine, throws me off game
Showed me where the chalk laid after his shot rang
Off the top it's a soft play, time to even the score
Redeem it with force, this many parteners havent seen a divorce
And believe it's for sure, I been at the bottoms of barrels
A type of sorrow which tells truth, a hollow compells you
To think bottles will help you, so you fill a cup up
See how far the luck run continues when your fucked up
Hit them like a dump truck, clearing tables of debris
Maybe a fable as it seems, but I'll train you to believe
I'll rip a stable at the seams, and tear the gates down
It's all in place now as I bounce to evade crowds
Of hands displayed proud, then I drop in the bucket
Hear 'em talking like 'Fuck It', eyes in shock as they're rubbin'
Drink it all like they're something, alcohol makes those tears long
When you playin' a true test, the best, at BEER PONG!!!
Haha, just thought I would try to bring something new to the table. Let me know what you think.
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