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The Bitter End

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I scour deep, wage war against the powers that be within me,
Where sin sleeps, grim things reap the strong and the weak,

Taken for keeps, to make seas from tears nations will weep,
I take leaps and rage more than I let cowardice creep,

Empower this freak with a listen and a knock of the knee,
Not from fear, instead just hear the pain now showering me,

Devouring seams inside, confiding, biding, towering steep,
Loudening screams, scavenging sanity, early hours, no sleep,

My burdens sour the sweet, the meek live, the bold fall,
A long wind drawls as we all seek highs to answer calls,

But fear heights and tumbles lest we should slip and be gone,
Seen on the face of a love, haggard, sunk into misery, bawl,

Crawl through maggot meat of all the righteous that died,
In search of the light, in the end it governs their lives,

And smothers their minds, innocence lost, a dove on a line,
A scrub and a shine for an ego just as pompous as mine,

Hopelessly blind, I'll find forever if ever never defines,
The mold I broke to stroke and grope malignancy to benign,

A prophecy that lunacy befriends, a waste of my time,
I sought to be the bitter end, sent to kill an agent divine,
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[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
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Re: The Bitter End

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This has an amazing flow. Short bars and flow make reading writtens so much more enjoyable.
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:clap: :clap: nice to see u back... good ish as always... imagery was insainly vivid... flow... lyricism... everything was great... keep dropping mayn...
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Appreciate it, Fam!!
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

[center]a-series-of-unfortunate-events-vt23866.html[/center]
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this was very cool i enjoyed reading it nice flow, loved it! :)
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Re: The Bitter End

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Appreciate that, Vanity.
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

[center]a-series-of-unfortunate-events-vt23866.html[/center]
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Dude This Imagrey Is Amazing Right Here.. Dope Piece Dope Thoughts Another great job'
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as always another sick written bro ive always liked ur shit keep doin ya thing! ur gettin better and fast. 1
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Re: The Bitter End

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Nice drop man.....
I enjoyed every lines you had in it
good drop man keep @ it
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Appreciate it, all.
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
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[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

[center]a-series-of-unfortunate-events-vt23866.html[/center]
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