Re: This Love
Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 9:30 am
i was feeling this more as a poem.. it had a poetic feel to it, and it wasn't lyrical at all... but i don't think u were trying to be. I was feelin the realness of it...
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Re: This Love
Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 9:33 am
damn, hella weak...not even gonna bother breaking this one down...
Re: This Love
Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 10:16 am
It was simple and straightforward. A well executed ridding of thoughts, imo. I could relate to what you were saying, and fuck a structure, it had flow. Good drop.
Re: This Love
Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 10:32 am
Yezzir, u know the two link rule man... Where they at?
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Re: This Love
Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 11:24 am
This wuz sum decent shit...but we all know. U cud do better..u weren't vinting?...to me it wuz creative
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Re: This Love
Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 11:48 am
I like this, its simple but the emotion in the analogies are pretty coo.
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