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Enlightend
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i was feeling this more as a poem.. it had a poetic feel to it, and it wasn't lyrical at all... but i don't think u were trying to be. I was feelin the realness of it...
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damn, hella weak...not even gonna bother breaking this one down...
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It was simple and straightforward. A well executed ridding of thoughts, imo. I could relate to what you were saying, and fuck a structure, it had flow. Good drop.
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Yezzir, u know the two link rule man... Where they at?

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Post by KING RUM12 »

This wuz sum decent shit...but we all know. U cud do better..u weren't vinting?...to me it wuz creative

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I like this, its simple but the emotion in the analogies are pretty coo.

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