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a War Inside

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evil contained in the membrane of my brain
heart wanting good but my bodies fearing change
chasing heaven through the roads on hells lanes
mind strained wit migraines wonderin if God felt pain
good and evil waging war for possession of my soul
feeling cursed stress putting tension on my goals
stuck in a rut with the presence of heaven the high road
perpetually fighting myself reluctant to fight more
the devils calling me but from god i hear silence
forgetting to pray cause at night i mirror violence
no mans an island but i stand to stay defiant
gods good in evil ways making devils to fray tyrants
so i stay feeling shitty on the losing side of the battle
gods a joker breeding humans as we breed cattle
getting knocked off my horse with grit on my saddle
feeling lost on shits creek and i think i lost my paddle
as i continue watching the war rage inside of me
violently fighting the onslaught as fingertips pry at me
churches lie to me telling me to repent from heresy
as im standing on the ledge with gods and devils daring me

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Damn dude, the whole thing was dope, but that last line really fucking did it for me.
as im standing on the ledge with gods and devils daring me
That shit was deep dude. I guess it's just the wording but it provokes thought. Dope drop, man.
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liked it, liked it alot..nice drop yo...keep em coming
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thanks fellas uppin
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