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Game 4 Manslaughter (A New MixxTape Joint from A.M.E.)

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This is tha newest joint from me and my guys over here at A.M.E. (Anger Manij'ment Entertainment) It's Joe Jilla feat. Flame-On and Me ofcourse (Kurse)...lemme know whut'cha'll think.
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Isn't viral in A.M.E? Oh well. Listening to the track now
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complexity wrote:Isn't viral in A.M.E? Oh well. Listening to the track now
Oh no doubt...but A.M.E. is my label that I started about 2 years ago and there's 10 artists under my label. Viral is 1 of 4 or 5 solo artists...as for the rest of the squadd, 2 of the others guys are a duo and the rest are a group.
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I loved the the wind blows hard but the *** blow harder.

First verse sounded like jadakiss on that track lyric wise, which is good.

I think your vocals could have been a little louder Kurse.
The verse fitted nice in the track though. I liked it.

The guy repeating manslaughter a million times was annoying and pointless in my opinion. I honestly would recommend taking that out if at all possible. I guess see what other people think.

Last two verses were pretty nice. The flow was good. Lyrics were above average.

Eh. If you could put in order of who spits. It would help a lot.
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Interesting facts. We really do need to do that interview some-how.
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Eh. I think it was just how I had my volume settings with the vocals recommendation. Sorry for filling your thread with so many posts
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stop stickying your audios
and wheres the vote link?
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Subsist wrote:stop stickying your audios
and wheres the vote link?
Don't tell me how to post my shit bitch...you got NO SAY in my shit!
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complexity wrote:I loved the the wind blows hard but the *** blow harder.

First verse sounded like jadakiss on that track lyric wise, which is good.

I think your vocals could have been a little louder Kurse.
The verse fitted nice in the track though. I liked it.

The guy repeating manslaughter a million times was annoying and pointless in my opinion. I honestly would recommend taking that out if at all possible. I guess see what other people think.

Last two verses were pretty nice. The flow was good. Lyrics were above average.

Eh. If you could put in order of who spits. It would help a lot.
1st Verse Was Joe Jilla
2nd Verse Was Kurse
3rd Verse Was Joe Jilla
4th Verse Was Flame-On
Chorus (hook) done by Flame-On
Outro Was Kurse

It's not a finished mastered copy...just a quick "throw togther" to get feedback.
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complexity wrote:Interesting facts. We really do need to do that interview some-how.
I'm ready whenever you are. When are you free?
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Lets just do it text. If you want to do it solo. Just message me on aim. metaphoric flow
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dis track is doooope...beat is hot shit...i should b by later today to get shit done....i tried to call u but my phone is fucked soooo dat wont work too well..haha...
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Kurse wrote:
Subsist wrote:stop stickying your audios
and wheres the vote link?
Don't tell me how to post my shit bitch...you got NO SAY in my shit!
yes i do im a user on this site and everyone should be equally treated therefore its not fair that you sticky every track you make like its your own fuckin pin board or something.
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Post by precise »

holy fuck subsist, everytime i see one of your posts its you bitchin about something

and that track is niiiiice
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