Hip Hop Forum

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/ick-i ... ml#p174782
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/take- ... ml#p174783

Just a piece i keyed up at work. 

I connect my pen with paper, lace the beat and cause your heart to skip a beat/
Balistic speech, terrific feats, kause is who you wish to be/
Horrifically murder the mic and leave the spot a murder scene/
Believe its me, i know most of you havnt heard of me/
, my words are real i know i aint no marshal mathers/
Yet im gettin slept on worse than an ice addicts mattress/
Perfection from practice, i stay up on the atlas/
Throwin AUS up on the map rough as guts on these rappers/
Turn the page on these actors tryna look attractive/
, my gas wont run out they just burn out like matches/
A multi maniac describes me quite precicely/
I write nightly and let my minds thoughts define me/
, you cant bite lines of mine, theyll leave your teeth Cracked/
I proceed to speak facts with each rap i breathe thats/
A part of me you cant remove, and thats the truth/
You can lock it up and hide it ill still crack the booth/

[ Post made via Mobile Device ]

this was ok.... lyrically was simple ie punches were basic... but it still came off as a ok piece

good lil key my friend.. quick rhymes.. good flow works with the ozzy accent you got too.. keep it up man

yeah the flow was dope here, simple, but rhymes were placed and executed nicely

[ Post made via Mobile Device ]