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Kause mc
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Just a piece i keyed up at work. 

I connect my pen with paper, lace the beat and cause your heart to skip a beat/
Balistic speech, terrific feats, kause is who you wish to be/
Horrifically murder the mic and leave the spot a murder scene/
Believe its me, i know most of you havnt heard of me/
, my words are real i know i aint no marshal mathers/
Yet im gettin slept on worse than an ice addicts mattress/
Perfection from practice, i stay up on the atlas/
Throwin AUS up on the map rough as guts on these rappers/
Turn the page on these actors tryna look attractive/
, my gas wont run out they just burn out like matches/
A multi maniac describes me quite precicely/
I write nightly and let my minds thoughts define me/
, you cant bite lines of mine, theyll leave your teeth Cracked/
I proceed to speak facts with each rap i breathe thats/
A part of me you cant remove, and thats the truth/
You can lock it up and hide it ill still crack the booth/

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Re: Quick written

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this was ok.... lyrically was simple ie punches were basic... but it still came off as a ok piece
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good lil key my friend.. quick rhymes.. good flow works with the ozzy accent you got too.. keep it up man
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Re: Quick written

Post by Tha Dark Prince »

yeah the flow was dope here, simple, but rhymes were placed and executed nicely

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