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How Life Changed

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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JONoz3T0x_o[/video]

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Beat is nice, but needs better mixin. Your lyrics are solid, but I think you should try addin more multis man. Makes your verse more interesting and shows skills. Like I said, lyrically nice tho. Chorus was alright... aint really feel it to be honest man.
Overall, nice track tho! Keep up the good work.
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lyrically its there -- quality is not though - besides that chorus could be a bit louder, well mixing all around could use somme polishing -- flow was dope... delivery & presence need more confidence --- keep @ it man.... not a bad track just work on the mixing
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