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I Understand
Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2011 4:14 am
by Audible Thought
http://soundcloud.com/dimapapkovski33/a ... understand
A short but dope track I recorded. Beat by Apollo Brown.
Re: I Understand
Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2011 4:19 am
by Lawgix
this is a nice beat... lyrics are dope... kinda monotone a bit... but still man good shit fam... keep droppin... give this a 7/10
Re: I Understand
Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2011 6:48 am
by Mic S
This was pretty cool - mellow beat
delivery seemed shaky but flow was cool
good short track though,
lyrics were cool - nice job with what you did here
Re: I Understand
Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2011 7:29 am
by Loon E Lou
ok im listening...........
beat is very nice. starts in nice and slow.
u ride the beat nice. i like the little mixture of rap/singin. i think maybe a couple more switch ups in your flow would bring it out more. some different rhyme schemes to throw the listener off of the pattern your staying on. a couple different times on ur verses, you fell off a lil. not really fallin off, as much as maybe jus re-wording some parts so they land and sound better. i think maybe a couple more takes at your verses, now that your comfortable with em, and land em a bit more precise.
overall tho, this was nice man. kinda short, but nice. nice listen
Re: I Understand
Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2011 4:08 pm
by TreTru
hmm i like da beat..niice.
lyrics are good so far...uhh oh.ya delivery needs some werk..
umm sounds towards da middle like ya tryin to harmonize..but ya not quite @ the right note imo..
other than that this actually could be a cool lil banger ..you know this beat is funkable..jus rerecord it dude..shit could be fire..1