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I Understand

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http://soundcloud.com/dimapapkovski33/a ... understand

A short but dope track I recorded. Beat by Apollo Brown.
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this is a nice beat... lyrics are dope... kinda monotone a bit... but still man good shit fam... keep droppin... give this a 7/10
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Re: I Understand

Post by Mic S »

This was pretty cool - mellow beat
delivery seemed shaky but flow was cool
good short track though,
lyrics were cool - nice job with what you did here
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Re: I Understand

Post by Loon E Lou »

ok im listening...........

beat is very nice. starts in nice and slow.

u ride the beat nice. i like the little mixture of rap/singin. i think maybe a couple more switch ups in your flow would bring it out more. some different rhyme schemes to throw the listener off of the pattern your staying on. a couple different times on ur verses, you fell off a lil. not really fallin off, as much as maybe jus re-wording some parts so they land and sound better. i think maybe a couple more takes at your verses, now that your comfortable with em, and land em a bit more precise.

overall tho, this was nice man. kinda short, but nice. nice listen
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Post by TreTru »

hmm i like da beat..niice.

lyrics are good so far...uhh oh.ya delivery needs some werk..

umm sounds towards da middle like ya tryin to harmonize..but ya not quite @ the right note imo..

other than that this actually could be a cool lil banger ..you know this beat is funkable..jus rerecord it dude..shit could be fire..1
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