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A short but dope track I recorded. Beat by Apollo Brown.
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Re: I Understand
this is a nice beat... lyrics are dope... kinda monotone a bit... but still man good shit fam... keep droppin... give this a 7/10
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Re: I Understand
This was pretty cool - mellow beat
delivery seemed shaky but flow was cool
good short track though,
lyrics were cool - nice job with what you did here
delivery seemed shaky but flow was cool
good short track though,
lyrics were cool - nice job with what you did here
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Re: I Understand
ok im listening...........
beat is very nice. starts in nice and slow.
u ride the beat nice. i like the little mixture of rap/singin. i think maybe a couple more switch ups in your flow would bring it out more. some different rhyme schemes to throw the listener off of the pattern your staying on. a couple different times on ur verses, you fell off a lil. not really fallin off, as much as maybe jus re-wording some parts so they land and sound better. i think maybe a couple more takes at your verses, now that your comfortable with em, and land em a bit more precise.
overall tho, this was nice man. kinda short, but nice. nice listen
beat is very nice. starts in nice and slow.
u ride the beat nice. i like the little mixture of rap/singin. i think maybe a couple more switch ups in your flow would bring it out more. some different rhyme schemes to throw the listener off of the pattern your staying on. a couple different times on ur verses, you fell off a lil. not really fallin off, as much as maybe jus re-wording some parts so they land and sound better. i think maybe a couple more takes at your verses, now that your comfortable with em, and land em a bit more precise.
overall tho, this was nice man. kinda short, but nice. nice listen
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hmm i like da beat..niice.
lyrics are good so far...uhh oh.ya delivery needs some werk..
umm sounds towards da middle like ya tryin to harmonize..but ya not quite @ the right note imo..
other than that this actually could be a cool lil banger ..you know this beat is funkable..jus rerecord it dude..shit could be fire..1
lyrics are good so far...uhh oh.ya delivery needs some werk..
umm sounds towards da middle like ya tryin to harmonize..but ya not quite @ the right note imo..
other than that this actually could be a cool lil banger ..you know this beat is funkable..jus rerecord it dude..shit could be fire..1
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