I.T.S Nell - End Of My Time

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I.T.S Nell - End Of My Time

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wyOm0s7vSIo&NR=1

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The accent is british Btw

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Pretty nice beat, and you rode the shit out of it. I'm diggin the flow and I ain't never heard a British rapper before now and the accent really wasn't that bad, if anything it added to the flow of the beat pretty coo, keep it up.

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Is that an accent I detect? TO be honest, accents tend to turn me off to someone's audio...But, I'll comment on the mechanics of flow, etc...

Flow sounds cool on this beat...works well...

Lots of energy in your presence and delivery...which is good

Tough to decipher the lyrics...

Beat is cool...and I like the melody in it


Hook sounds like the lyrics are introspective...Sounds coo...almost like it has auto tune on some parts...


Overall, this was an interesting listen and a good track.



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pretty sure i listened to this, just never commented.
here goes..

vocals are to low, but still loud enough to hear it for the most part.
you sound a lil lack luster, if you add more of a consistent energy to your verse it'll come off nicer. flows nice, presence/delivery is alright.. kinda up and down as i said before. you have some nice switch up's between faster n slower flows. lyrics are nice, some corny lines like: "left in a burnin inferno then fight ya, like some sort of fi-re figh-ter..".. ya know, but its nothin serious. you muffle a lil here and there, but tbh its not a huge issue.
verses are solid, few slips here n there.. nothin to bad though.
on to the hook... wow, IMHO... its DOPE.. lil more energy and feeling and it would be incredible. no lie..really feeling the hook man.

over-all, solid track. keep at it.

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Post by Mic S »

flow was cool, lyrics was dope - delivery was cool -- but sometimes your delivery had to many words crammed so your flow would speed up throwing it off in a couple spots -- and sometimes that was just how the flow was (So know i'm not talking bout those spots) talkin about the few spots u lost the beat...... hook was dope

this was a cool track... so i liked the video and subscribed.!
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this beat is nice..
hmm..ya flo is ...pretty good dude...hmm small slip no biggie lyrics sound aight ...nah dey pretty good .

haha auto tune on da hook is decent too..haha not an easy task imo..

2nd verse ..well after the pause ya dropped ya flow a lil bit but you picked it back up ..not bad..

this is a cool lil song here bro..like most of ya flo ..juss gotta werk a lil on fittin ya sylls in da pocket...stay on ya gamedawg...1
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