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meet your maker cooking beef with flavor
so hot you can see the vapors
i see you haters but i will see you later
cause its grind time when i cross the fine line
making moves cause its my time
as i design rhymes smoking like a prime time
the master of frees flowing like disasters at sea
running like no ones faster than me
i flatter tha beast with a matter of speech
to eloquent to stop as i represent the block
sick with the evidence to rock
setting precedence to clocks ticking on a tock
like fuck the laws of physics i'm raw an gifted
acting like i'll stall but im balleriffic
its all exquisite but im allways on with this shit
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

lol @ balleriffic, nice multies, nothing superb but simple and tasteful, good drop
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Post by Tha Dark Prince »

Good drop.. Flow was nice

as i design rhymes smoking like a
prime time
the master of frees flowing like
disasters at sea
running like no ones faster than
me
i flatter tha beast with a matter of
speech

^ that ish was nice I like

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Post by Demo+ »

This Was Nice. Its Like Simple Rhymes Made Effective I Think.. Good Shit All In All
Aiight Punches.. It Went Well Wit Tha Verse.. Jus Get As Creative As Possible And Add Some Wordplay..

Decent Keystyle


Keep Droppin N Elevatin..

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Post by leeroi green »

what up d this is pretty dope for the most part the flow is cool but i was curious if you are just writing for the sport of it or if you are writing with the purpose of telling a story i have noticed that a few of your pieces just end abruptly im not trying to down play your work it def'nately fresh but i think you should always end on a high note good drop you crushin a lot of writtens on here
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