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Evolution versus Murk McNasty

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Re: Evolution versus Murk McNasty

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check, due date 1 hour

-- Wed May 18, 2011 2:10 am --

you're exactly what worthless trash is, Murk is average, you'll always trail behind Da Rippa cause your words is Jack shit,
from what i've read, that verse is wack bitch, being proud of something gay is why you DEFINE the PERFECT FAGGOT,
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/jackk ... 22173.html

i'll leave your surface damaged, kid your simplistic, see i don't need a picture to win this,
NOW you don't need one either? that's cause my name alone is too big for your image,

you're pure fillers n gimmicks, this is just practice.. go ahead.. twitter the scrimmage,
you should be honor'd to have me around, just reading one of my scripture's a privilege,

all those guys in your crew and not a single one is forcin this man to BE BETTER,
funny guy.. think you can speak clever, this joker needs more than a hand from Heath Ledger (Murk's signature)

if u ever gained a title it'd be a weak header,and this fag's dynasty has passed finally,
i'll throw the headline to smash violently,so it reads.. "MURK GETS MURKED"..now THAT'S IRONY!!
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Re: Evolution versus Murk McNasty

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Like 'Obama on Bin Ladin', I'll take apart ya buildings, Evo 'marks' Murk with 'a type of envy'
Only time "Evolution made a point with progression of life" was the "Darwin Theory" !!!!!

"Evolution"? Pffftttt... I'm the dawn of centuries, you battle a great and I'll 'smack you with fate'
'Evolution only counts for something' in life when its a fucking 'matter of faith' !!!!!

Going against Murk is a `savage` mistake, the `common will pray` the 'optics relay'
Only way you could 'see me' is if "Smoke in Mirrors" was still hot like in "Copperfield's day" !!!!

Like coffins I 'box in the prey', 'caskets' for bastards, bet that Murk will bomb for free
And take out your "Crue cause I'd rape them fools", like this was a "porn made by Tommy Lee" !!!

In this battle I make you dishonest, please... 'Beat Murk' ?!? That's 'actual Evolution' !
Matter of fact, this fag bragging about beating anyone on site worth a fuck is a practical revolution !!!

My punches will bash your dome till your puking, 'hoe', I'm not 'hearing the sentiments',
Only time I noticed 'Evolution ever getting off' was a 'bitch getting her period' !!!!
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Re: Evolution versus Murk McNasty

Post by Alvin »

Evolution

you're exactly what worthless trash is, Murk is average, you'll always trail behind Da Rippa cause your words is Jack shit,
from what i've read, that verse is wack bitch, being proud of something gay is why you DEFINE the PERFECT FAGGOT,
jackked-bye-jack-vt22173.html
Ahahahaha, the wording is cool but the personal blow is what makes me laugh. Lol at the perfect fagg(i)t.
i'll leave your surface damaged, kid your simplistic, see i don't need a picture to win this,
NOW you don't need one either? that's cause my name alone is too big for your image,
Nice carry over with the rhyme scheme, LOL at the concept, but it reminds me of a line soul khan dropped in one of his battles, so it loses originality to me.
you're pure fillers n gimmicks, this is just practice.. go ahead.. twitter the scrimmage,
you should be honor'd to have me around, just reading one of my scripture's a privilege,
Nooot really feeling this one. The "this is just practice" threw the flow off for me, and it seemed like you were more concerned about multies than an actual well delivered punch.
all those guys in your crew and not a single one is forcin this man to BE BETTER,
funny guy.. think you can speak clever, this joker needs more than a hand from Heath Ledger (Murk's signature)
LOL at the sig connection, but the set up kinda fell short to something that could have been really funny.
if u ever gained a title it'd be a weak header,and this fag's dynasty has passed finally,
i'll throw the headline to smash violently,so it reads.. "MURK GETS MURKED"..now THAT'S IRONY!!
Maaaaaan, i was hoping to laugh my ass off at the end, but i didnt. I like the concept, rhymeschemes on point, wordplay with title, header, headline, I just wasnt a big fan.


Murk McNasty

Like 'Obama on Bin Ladin', I'll take apart ya buildings, Evo 'marks' Murk with 'a type of envy'
Only time "Evolution made a point with progression of life" was the "Darwin Theory" !!!!!
lol at the punch itself, but i have to stare at the set up a bit to make sense of it. Obama didnt take out buildings, but what does bin and oban have to do with envy?
"Evolution"? Pffftttt... I'm the dawn of centuries, you battle a great and I'll 'smack you with fate'
'Evolution only counts for something' in life when its a fucking 'matter of faith' !!!!!
I dont really like this bar. I see what you're saying, but i seriously have to keep re reading it over and over. "you battle a great, ill smack you with fate" < doesnt really connect for me.
Going against Murk is a `savage` mistake, the `common will pray` the 'optics relay'
Only way you could 'see me' is if "Smoke in Mirrors" was still hot like in "Copperfield's day" !!!!
Its a general bar, and im spending a whole lot of time connecting everything lol. The wordplay is pretty dope... but all these things "'.;'/; mess it up for me.
Like coffins I 'box in the prey', 'caskets' for bastards, bet that Murk will bomb for free
And take out your "Crue cause I'd rape them fools", like this was a "porn made by Tommy Lee" !!!
Whyd you pell crew "crue"? I guess im lost yet again. Box, casket nice wordplay. But the change to ill bomb your face doesnt fit.
In this battle I make you dishonest, please... 'Beat Murk' ?!? That's 'actual Evolution' !
Matter of fact, this fag bragging about beating anyone on site worth a fuck is a practical revolution !!!
lol, i like this one.
My punches will bash your dome till your puking, 'hoe', I'm not 'hearing the sentiments',
Only time I noticed 'Evolution ever getting off' was a 'bitch getting her period' !!!!
I dont understand this one either. you do 'this' to say look, they have something in common you dumb reader... but i cant make connections between hoe, to sentiments, evo getting off, and a chick getting her period. But im prolly one of them dumb people.


All in all, MVGT Evo.



Evo, you started better than you ended... I'd be interested to see what your battles look like when you take your time writing them.

Murk, either you're stretching for stuff im not seeing, or SIMPLY, i am too dumb to be voting. Im ok with the latter, thought id vote anyways.
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Re: Evolution versus Murk McNasty

Post by Loon E Lou »

alright man. this i thought was a good match between two different ages heavy weights. Evo i consider you a vet at this shit, and Murk, you comin around as someone not to fuck with also. mad respect for both of you, but honestly, didnt go out with a bang like i figured it would. Evo i thought your first line, was by far your best outta the verse. set up, punch and flow. all hit perfectly and had me laughin right out the gates.

you're exactly what worthless trash is, Murk is average, you'll always trail behind Da Rippa cause your words is Jack shit,
from what i've read, that verse is wack bitch, being proud of something gay is why you DEFINE the PERFECT FAGGOT,

awesome way to jump in. but then it kinda went in an out the rest of the verse. i mean, dont get me wrong, all your lines were better than anything i can ever put together, but i believe ive read some slightly better pieces from you in the past. all in all tho, a fairly solid verse.

murk, this is what kinda gave me a repetetive feel to your verse:

ONLY time "Evolution made a point with progression of life" was the "Darwin Theory" !!!!!

'Evolution ONLY counts for something' in life when its a fucking 'matter of faith' !!!!!


ONLY way you could 'see me' is if "Smoke in Mirrors" was still hot like in "Copperfield's day" !!!!

ONLY time I noticed 'Evolution ever getting off' was a 'bitch getting her period' !!!!


ya know what i mean? since the verses werent meant to be very long, readin those lines after almost every set up, kinda killed it for me. the punches were there for the most part, but the repetetiveness of the follow thru's, lost the edge for me.

i dont know if i need to break down any more, but i hope you guys consider this a fair vote.

i gotta go with EVO on this one. Murk, i think if you fix your follow through on your lines, youll have a more solid, hard hitting verse. good matchup amigos, respect for both of you
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Re: Evolution versus Murk McNasty

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you're exactly what worthless trash is, Murk is average, you'll always trail behind Da Rippa cause your words is Jack shit,
from what i've read, that verse is wack bitch, being proud of something gay is why you DEFINE the PERFECT FAGGOT,
jackked-bye-jack-vt22173.html
(tight wordplay,personal, solid punch,)

i'll leave your surface damaged, kid your simplistic, see i don't need a picture to win this,
NOW you don't need one either? that's cause my name alone is too big for your image,
(decent multies,nameplay,good punch,)

you're pure fillers n gimmicks, this is just practice.. go ahead.. twitter the scrimmage,
you should be honor'd to have me around, just reading one of my scripture's a privilege,
(nice multies,not a strong punch)

all those guys in your crew and not a single one is forcin this man to BE BETTER,
funny guy.. think you can speak clever, this joker needs more than a hand from Heath Ledger (Murk's signature)
(cool personal,ok multies,decent punch)

if u ever gained a title it'd be a weak header,and this fag's dynasty has passed finally,
i'll throw the headline to smash violently,so it reads.. "MURK GETS MURKED"..now THAT'S IRONY!!
(decent multies,name play,decent ender,and an alrite punch)

vs



Like 'Obama on Bin Ladin', I'll take apart ya buildings, Evo 'marks' Murk with 'a type of envy'
Only time "Evolution made a point with progression of life" was the "Darwin Theory" !!!!!
(nice name play,decent punch)

"Evolution"? Pffftttt... I'm the dawn of centuries, you battle a great and I'll 'smack you with fate'
'Evolution only counts for something' in life when its a fucking 'matter of faith' !!!!!
(ok multies,good punch,and name play,)

Going against Murk is a `savage` mistake, the `common will pray` the 'optics relay'
Only way you could 'see me' is if "Smoke in Mirrors" was still hot like in "Copperfield's day" !!!!
(ok multies,ok punch)


Like coffins I 'box in the prey', 'caskets' for bastards, bet that Murk will bomb for free
And take out your "Crue cause I'd rape them fools", like this was a "porn made by Tommy Lee" !!!

In this battle I make you dishonest, please... 'Beat Murk' ?!? That's 'actual Evolution' !
Matter of fact, this fag bragging about beating anyone on site worth a fuck is a practical revolution !!!
(ok personal,ok name play,good multies,good punch,)

My punches will bash your dome till your puking, 'hoe', I'm not 'hearing the sentiments',
Only time I noticed 'Evolution ever getting off' was a 'bitch getting her period' !!!!
(this ruined it for me,it sounded like a compliment almost)

much respect to both emcees,
MVGT evo
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Re: Evolution versus Murk McNasty

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

alright that's 3-0 unless u don't want to count somebody's vote, if so just re-open it, closing it for now


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