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Heartless bitch

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how could you rip my heart from my chest
now my thinking has gotten dark and depressed
from the start you were fresh, but that quickly changed
you went from lovie dovie to a bitch in the flames
you ripped and you maimed claiming i was weak with no brains
i thought you were hot while you leached off my pain
how could something so beautiful be so deceitful
behind closed doors you evil while out side your nice to people
it shouldnt be legal to do the things you did to me
as i yell at god "i wish youd never took this rib from me"
but sillily i tried to make this convoluted relationship work
while you plotted behind my back it got blatantly worse
i was brave at it first but soon i plotted to kill you
fill you with bullets head to toe than conceal you
the thoughts were real too at once i even dream about it
you could take a bright day and fucking cloud it
i doubted that you were real to me always creeping around
saying your at your girl friends i know your sleeping arround
so im keepin a frown cause at one time i would have died for you
cried for you even kill and take some ones life for you
now my heart is sliced in two and you seem unphased
some say love is mysterious but i think it'll kill us one day
its worse than gun play.. so i'm leaving you bitch
i've had enough of this heart shit so ime leaving it ripped
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Re: Heartless bitch

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i enjoyed every bar except the very last one i was kinda lossed on its meaning however the rest was a thing of beauty and a bitches ugliness lol i felt that way before and im sure a million people could relate onther nice drop i cant really help to much you got this nice drop be easy homie

-- Tue Apr 26, 2011 12:19 pm --

i enjoyed every bar except the very last one i was kinda lossed on its meaning however the rest was a thing of beauty and a bitches ugliness lol i felt that way before and im sure a million people could relate onther nice drop i cant really help to much you got this nice drop be easy homie
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Re: Heartless bitch

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Man, you communicated your message effectively and you were straight to the point. I felt this because bitches lie. Nice drop, bruh.
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Re: Heartless bitch

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uppin this shit
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Re: Heartless bitch

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i've been through the same fuck the bitches loved it man keep dat shit pumpin
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