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Mack Lazarus vs Grim(Grim wins 3-2)

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house rules..8 bars..24 hours..let's go
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Re: Mack Lazarus vs Grim/part 4

Post by Mack Lazarus »

I hope we can still be friends after this...

peep


shit cracks me up how Grim acts like he hates battlers that brag
but yer the cat who does nothing BUT that in the Box ya fag

me me meeeee like he's rehearsin for an opera
Stop Crying to the P and that goes for the lot of ya

it's improper, bruh. I wouldnt want ME here EIther the way i talk to ya
After I dismantle your feelings ya gonna need more than a doctor huh

Save the fagadocio for the forums. When You speak ya just boring them.
Using Wikipedia and acting like you a historian...

It makes me Grimace when Mack's D is in ya face bitch
His 9 piece hot off ya grill and gettin tangled in ya braces

You need to come to Laz - R - us and buy yourself some new word games
cause your childish behavior is gettin worse and your verses are lame

Your shit is just too repetitious while mine is verse-a-tile and vicious
and thats why You keep readin my scriptures like a Jehovah's Witness

You boastful bitch. this shit goes to you in hopes that it provokes your crew.
So its the rope for Grim's just a ghost And Lazarus arose to show you.


I color coded my internal and external rhymes for you fags.
so fuck off

just havin some fun


Get some Grim
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Re: Mack Lazarus vs Grim/part 4

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I'm mashing Mack,smash his act then that is that
I'll "snap his back" when I jack this cat.."clap" this MAC. (mack)

You slack at rap,you LAZy fuck..You got baby Nuts!!!
My flow's "rabid" got you foaming at the mouth like a "rabies" mutt

Rap?You couldn't master-this,Lazarus,You're flow's dizasterous.
Punches like you have-no-wrists.I hope this is the last-you-spit.

Mack's got that "cotton mouth" flow..no "spit" at all
I change the outcome like "seasons" when I "spring" you "fall"

Your chick's been around the block with like eighty-boys
Legs up like a LAZy boy, cum guzzling swallowing "babies" boy!

I'll "gLAZe" this "turkey"..bLAZe'em like purp-weed.
But "duck" when he's "spitting"..it's laced with herpes.

Lazarus sounds like the name of a gay dinosaur.
Your style's "prehistoric".What the fuck are you rhyming-for!!!

You've got no "hoes",you're not a "truck",and you're not "double stacked"
You aren't "big",or a gun. How the fuck can you be a MACK?
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Re: Mack Lazarus vs Grim/part 4

Post by Defiance »

grim, you got the formula down my friend

good try for you though mack

it seemed to roll like this
flow-grim
personals-tie
punches-grim
wordplay-tie
enjoyment-MAck

my vote goes to grim

but that wikapedia line was killing me, thats what got you enjoyment

good battle
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Re: Mack Lazarus vs Grim/part 4

Post by Moneymaker »

Flow-GRIMM
Mulities-GRIMM
Enjoyment-MACK
Personals-MACK
Wordplay-MACK

MVGT-mack
Grimm the battle was nice including the mulities but Mack just hit a little more with his personals

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Re: Mack Lazarus vs Grim/part 4

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MVGT: Mack
Flow-Mack
Mulities-Grim
Enjoyment-Mack
Personals-Grim
Wordplay-Mack


I like the color code scheme thing...it helped me read your rhymes. Fucking tight battle this time. Grim you know you're tighter than that...a couple of those lines were beast, but some made me reminice about your past mack battles. Props though for going at it like...what?...3 times now. This like a world series Rap text battle...lol.
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Re: Mack Lazarus vs Grim/part 4

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2-1 Mack.upping
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Re: Mack Lazarus vs Grim/part 4

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up for votes
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Re: Mack Lazarus vs Grim/part 4

Post by leeroi green »

great battle

Save the fagadocio for the forums. When You speak ya just boring them.
Using Wikipedia and acting like you a historian...

It makes me Grimace when Mack's D is in ya face bitch
His 9 piece hot off ya grill and gettin tangled in ya braces

You need to come to Laz - R - us and buy yourself some new word games
cause your childish behavior is gettin worse and your verses are lame

Your shit is just too repetitious while mine is verse-a-tile and vicious
and thats why You keep readin my scriptures like a Jehovah's Witness


Mack's got that "cotton mouth" flow..no "spit" at all
I change the outcome like "seasons" when I "spring" you "fall"

Your chick's been around the block with like eighty-boys
Legs up like a LAZy boy, cum guzzling swallowing "babies" boy!

I'll "gLAZe" this "turkey"..bLAZe'em like purp-weed.
But "duck" when he's "spitting"..it's laced with herpes.

You've got no "hoes",you're not a "truck",and you're not "double stacked"
You aren't "big",or a gun. How the fuck can you be a MACK?



punches grim
flow mack
personals =
w/p grim
multis mack

well i gotta vote based on enjoyment and i liked them both but i gotta give it to Grim because his verse seemed to sting a bit more still nice drop fellas

MVGT Grim
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Re: Mack Lazarus vs Grim/part 4

Post by Poe-It »

wordplay-both
multies-grim
personals-mack id say overall but was close
punches-grims hit harder for me
enjoyment-grims
flow-grims

vote goes to grim

battle was sick tho nice shit from both of you
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Re: Mack Lazarus vs Grim/part 4

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-Thread Closed & Records Updated-

Grim wins 3-2
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