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Da_worst1
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To easyy..

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Boredd so i decided to drop sumthin..its been a while since i been up in here...well here it is.

I dont state the obvious im just simply contrastin,
I tell all my haters to split..fraction,
home alone in the rap game ready with a plan,
Heart of lion ya'll wish to have one like the tin man,
Damnn..my desicions are invisioned to a precise precision,
Ignition starts the flow and end in forced collusion,
meaning i cant b stopped i flow easy like a sentence,
bars always present wit me...perfect attendance,
And....Wit a Flow so contagious...yawn,
Always Ready in the frontline..pawn,
Breakin ur horizons..dawn,
Cuttin all the green...lawn,
one line punches cuz u cant survive a whole bar,
got the whammy in hand and i talkin bout guitar.

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good lil key dude, liked the precision line, flowed great

and welcome to illest keep um coming
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This had some pretty nice metaphors and it flowwed nicely ... you also had some good vocab like in the middle of your drop ... just one piece of advice , try not to rely on the one word punchlines so much .. But overall it was a decent dropp .

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im sikk of the young money flow...

I fukk bitches forcefully in the ass.... rapeist
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