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Squeaky Faucet Drip

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[{(Yawns)}]

Ok'
Flow Wet.. Went Underground N Left Reservoirs
Tha Rest Fightin Hogs Since Their Best Are Boars(Bores)
Sure.......
I Run Tha World On Tracks.. Fuck Runnin Ah' Meter
Super Whiz So My Skills Higher Than Khalifa
They Got Tha Munchies So If Its Beef I Might Eat Ya
I'll Get Mad N Crush Tha Game Im Ah' Cheater
Your Ah' Fuckin Lame.. Im Ah' Creature
In This Monster Movie Guts N Brains Double Feature
Will Feature You Gettin Fuckin Slain Under Bleachers
Kuz After Its Over.. Im Back In Tha Game
Heart Broken.. Usin Blood To Tackle Tha Pain
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you shit looks familiar like HAZARD

But man it seems like you spend more time capsing every letter

but this was solid for a lil key man..
liked the las 4 lines the best


good shit man
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Thanks ..
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Re: Squeaky Faucet Drip

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i like this...good wordplay and decent flow...had some fairly commplex lines...solid drop
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