Life

[PatronMylan]

I got my own family telling me I aint gon be nothing.
I know its hard but believe me ima be something.
Struggles through life.
A gun & a knife.
I remember back saying I was Tupacs wife.
Only eighteen years old;
& Im tryna figure out why the world is so cold.
Going through tribes & tribulations having no relations.
Im trying to think about my life as a celebration.
Coming from a small town.
Brothers always get clowned.
I aint tryna get down.
No father in my life. I had no’one to call dad.
Maybe thats the reason why I always stayed mad.
I had suicidal thoughts; overdosing on pills
And still today nobody knows how I feel.
School was rough,things were tough.
A,B & C’s. R.I.P Eazy E.
Life aint easy but if you stay strong,
And hope to live long, you’ll find yaself not being all alone.
Being called every name you can think of.
I’m like fuck em; cause I only trust the one above.

[pablo1212]

This little story flowwed pretty good , yet it seemed kind of simple ... yu shuld try using some challengin vocab , nd get more creative , maybe throw in a couple of metaphors ... but overall this was a good drop .

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