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Love the Way you Lie (remix)

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The day my heart died, was the day i flipped out
snapped screamed at you to get out the house,
And the look on your face it nearly killed me,
Tears streamed down your cheeks-
which caused my knees to buckle
in an instant i was weak,
hit the ground I screamed I’m Sorry!
went to hold you,
you threw me off you! I felt horrible!
Every time i called couldn’t help-
I’d get choked up-
i actually loved you
and you wouldn’t talk,
you wouldn’t give me the time or day to try and fix shit
you just let me burn til i went crazy with emotions mixed
and you can only take so much of the flame before you break and I broke
fell to pieces and lost all hope,
was stupid pain killers wouldn’t let me cope
And this is for anyone who’s lost the love of their life,
I’m talking about ripping out your heart so out they could be alive

just gonna stand there and watch me burn
that’s alright because i like the way it hurts
just gonna stand there and hear me cry
that’s alright because i love the way you lie

Its almost insane to say,
that i still love you the same way
since the first day our eye’s meet and our lips touched
i knew i was in love,
and its safe to say i think about you all the time,
maybe i am crazy, fuck it!
all i know is how i was when i was with you, you lifted me
I’m sorry i fucked up and its been 6 months and still fucking stuck
had shit for luck
and so many times i wanted to give up,
none of these girls are enough
They aren’t you, They don’t have your mind
your brain which made you.. you
fucking beautiful inside and out, believed in you, dreamed with you,
we suffered through whatever
we smiled we cried, thought we could out last any bad weather
storms would come but we’d fight them together

just gonna stand there and watch me burn
that’s alright because i like the way it hurts
just gonna stand there and hear me cry
that’s alright because i love the way you lie

So this is where I’m at, broken dreams drinking til i go black
all i know is baby i fucking want you back
tried to move on but i can’t its fucking whack,
She doesn’t talk like you,
she doesn’t act like you, she doesn’t fuck like you
am i twisted cause I’m actually speaking the truth,
instead of keeping these thoughts bottled up til i fucking puke
I’ll never run outta things to say, you told me FOREVER!
but what if we only had today,
would you even call, Care for a single second at all
when you left did you even FALL!
Maybe I hurt YOU! but baby you hurt ME! We’re equal,
You said you’ll always love ME!
So now I’m on a mission to be the best thing you ever left and someday I hope you SEE!
That we where both each others fucking Dreams!
and maybe dreams die but I do believe that love can keep us alive!!!
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Re: Love the Way you Lie (remix)

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shit actually sounded allright.. good flow worked with the beat.. would like to hear this in audio.. if you do that let me know
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Re: Love the Way you Lie (remix)

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Thanks for the reviews, its more of a expressive track, i will have a recorded track soon
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Re: Love the Way you Lie (remix)

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it was ok, but really needed to rhyme, it seems more like something someone would just talk over a track. Not that thats a bad thing.
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