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good One this Should Get More Views Honestly
you Drop a-lot Of Bars But they End Up fresh
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Poetry, articulate assonance & consonance//
Precept cadences of absonence & consequence//
Find the separation of accidents & common sense//
Then turn what is adamant... into confidence//
Those were bars of gold, my friend. The entire piece was an A+ all around, in my opinion. Great work.
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
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Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

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