Flawless vs. Invincible Lyricist

Invincible · Post by **Invincible** » Mon Nov 20, 2006 4:48 am

House Rules

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Mon Nov 20, 2006 3:35 pm

House Rules Meaning, 4 to 6 Bars?

Either Way, Drop Ya Verse An I'll Get At You, But Right Now I'm Just Checkin In, I Got Shit To Do Tomorrow An I Gotta Be Up By 5am in 5 Hours..

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Mon Nov 20, 2006 4:24 pm

My Bad I Got Ya PM Max 8.
2 Day Deadline When I Check In.
Wich Is Right Now...So Drop An I'll Try
An I'll Respond tomorrow I'm Shore.

Invincible · Post by **Invincible** » Tue Nov 21, 2006 11:38 am

You're as basic as college prerequesites and how to do it yourself guides.
No one knows of you like illestlyrics' hits. I'm the maincourse plus the sides.

You're only half a man similar to Lance Armstrong riding ball-less.
I could graph La Fan like Robert De Niro everyday writing Flawless.

Where's the beef? Thrusting off at Lawgix, He said "I prefer the print out picture".
Homosexual lief. Daily Busting Caps Like Convicts. I'm lighten'm up like a fixture

Your effectiveness is incompetent just as the haft of capital punishment.
Increase my strength by one hundred percent like a dietary supplement.

Basically, I'm holding the site down like the weight of a preacher.
Eventually, I'm molding the write noun on a slate like a teacher.

You're profoundly covered in flaws. The only heat you dropping are thermo-pads.
You're cutting lyrics like chain saws. You aint worth my time like commercial ads.

Make it simply comprehensible. You're easy to read like digital clocks.
Believe it Ripley or not. You're hitting wind like Anna Nicole Bangkok.

Only chance you will recieve a record deal is a discount on a Wal-Mart cd.
I surprise emcee's like a birthday party. Khilla dazed screaming "He after me".

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Wed Nov 22, 2006 6:12 pm

This Dude Be On Some Shit, How He Contradicts,
His Whole Flow It's Optimist, I'll Fold An Rock This Bitch//

Cuz How You Invincible With Four Losses Prick?,
I'm Exhausted With, This Whole Lawgix Shit//

So Raise Up Off My Dick, With This Nonsense Kid,
You Holdin The Site Down Is What's Incompetent//

Cuz You're Wack As Fuck, An Simplistic As Ever,
You'll Never See Spit Or Even Step On My Level//

So Lets Get It Settled, I've Gained Respect In The Ghetto,
So What The Fuck's Illest Lyrics Gonna Effect In This Rebel?//

I'll Rip Ya Head Apart, There Isn't no Question Mark,
My Words Penetrate Like A Sting Ray Through Ervins Chest An heart//

An You Act Like Your Vocab Can Save You,
But You Won't Last So Know That Ya Flows Ass, Ok Duke?//

I'll Deflate You Like I Was Usin Jenny Craigs Method,
You Still Would Of Loss If I Didn't Respond to This Thread Son!//

Momeijah · Post by **Momeijah** » Wed Nov 22, 2006 8:59 pm

Vocab: invincible
Multis: Flawless
Punches: Flawless
Mettas: invincible
Nameplay: invincible
Flow: Tie
Personals: Flawless
Creativity: invincible
Entertainment: invincible

Close Battle, But invincible Showed More Experience But a Lot Of The Battle Was Fillers.

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Wed Nov 22, 2006 9:22 pm

its close, invinible stepped it up and flawless was kinda lacking punches i'll vote tomorrow after i read it again

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Wed Nov 22, 2006 9:40 pm

I will vote tommorow as well. If its not closed by then. I really do thinkyou add to many concepts into each bar though invincible.

Kawnvikt · Post by **Kawnvikt** » Thu Nov 23, 2006 4:07 am

Vocab: invincible
Multis: Flawless
Punches: Flawless
Mettas: invincible
Nameplay: invincible
Flow: Tie
Personals: Flawless
Creativity: Flawless
Entertainment: Flawless

Personally It Was All A Good battle, overall Flaw took but my opinion is only because invincible tried to use way to much extended vocab with no purpouse.

Vote:Flawless

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Thu Nov 23, 2006 8:37 am

1-1 I Believe? Still Uppin..

TwIzTiD · Post by **TwIzTiD** » Thu Nov 23, 2006 9:07 am

Overall Inivincible 6
Flawless 7

Vote:Flawless

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Thu Nov 23, 2006 9:44 am

Vocab: invincible
Multis: Flawless inv only had 2 good lines
Punches: Flawless
Meta4s: invincible but metaphors don't mean shit in a battle
Nameplay: Flawless, invincible didn't really use many
Flow: Flawless, invincibles didn't have any rhythm whatsoever
Personals: Flawless
Creativity: invincible but it wasn't worded well so it wasn't very effective
Entertainment: Flawless

vote - Flawless

invincible you really need to work on your writing this was a tad better but you still used like more times than a valley girl, you don't understand the concept of nice disses, you could have a comparison every 4 syllables and it would still be a wack verse

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Thu Nov 23, 2006 9:52 am

When you are comparing the battle to something. People want it to be relevant. Bad example, but you stretch like fitness, its not that complex but much more relevant.

Vocab: invincible
Multis: Flawless
Punches: Flawless
Meta4s: Invincible
Nameplay: Flawless
Flow: Flawless
Personals: Flawless
Creativity: Invincible
Entertainment: Flawless

vote - Flawless

I did copy Killahs cats because they were exactly correct.

Flawless is up 3-1

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Thu Nov 23, 2006 10:46 am

I Believe That's 4-1**..

Thanks To Those That Voted, Still Upping Though I Think, First To 5 Since The KO Was Ruled Out, Right?

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Thu Nov 23, 2006 10:53 am

Yes. 4-1. And house rules is 5 if not K0

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