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PARTY ON!

Posted: Mon Feb 21, 2011 6:42 am
by Slicka
tried to stucture it diff didnt come out like i wanted it to but here it is

Re: PARTY ON!

Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 6:38 pm
by TreTru
this beats cool..

uhhm lyrics are decent...but the verses sounds like your readin it..
i think the concept is good tho..
you might wanna relay the singin in the hook

but its potentially aight keep doin ya thing..