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PARTY ON!

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Slicka
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tried to stucture it diff didnt come out like i wanted it to but here it is
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this beats cool..

uhhm lyrics are decent...but the verses sounds like your readin it..
i think the concept is good tho..
you might wanna relay the singin in the hook

but its potentially aight keep doin ya thing..
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