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I'm feeling that the past has just zoomed past
now the future is nearing really fast
im right in the middle like blind halve cast
it doesn't really matter though whether its
Halve full or halve empty still manage to break the fcin glass
why they keep saying that the future is bright as if the past was dark
Here's ur lil present in da middle of a fart
wind breeze frm the sea be or not be
im not sure when 2 pull-up the mast
unaware that im stuck in the boot of a fishy looking car
wondering how long does thiz rollercast of live even last
fc what the ras clad did i just sparked
u die on point when God gives u the mark
missout on boarding the ark a bit to late to bark
cause when the lights are out and it doesn't sound like rockwilder's beat
hmmm i'm afraid son that you having a real blackout
which bares the only trademark that the soul & body have just separated apart
apart frm being on the upcoming pages, the later stages im just living on daily basis
Basically each day has his own funny faces which faces all sort of cases
for instance in some odd cases i'm casually strolling around with some offkey lasses
in other times you'll find me chasing, pacing, erasing
any object thats thrown towards moi exept occasionally my girlfriend's bra
she has raised the bar so high that the coffeshop was buried a life at broad daylight
she's my shooting star we have some lovely night, Midnight Lightning
she's stuck to my hip call it jimmy hendrixs guitar
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Ok.. Few good lines. 99.999% of that made no sence to me wat so ever. also theres like 3 or 4 different topics on this. One lines serious then another is on sum weird sorta humor shit.
U need alot of practice

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Aight Cool 1st of all thx for ur feed 2nd the 99.999% ur talkin about are mostly drilled down in metaphors so deep that it sounds or looks asif they were different topics but are all related in a way(maybe next time i'll break it down a bit more)
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Yea cool good idea bro keep posting

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yeah bro you deff need to break it down cuz it sort of made sense to me

this link opend my eyes so it should open yours

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/text- ... t3038.html
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Ok.. Few good lines. 99.999% of that made no sence to me wat so ever. also theres like 3 or 4 different topics on this. One lines serious then another is on sum weird sorta humor shit.
U need alot of practice
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