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Kuhlerblynd
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Re: Bored.

Post by Kuhlerblynd »

Lots of different stuff in this one. It's almost like these were three seperate piece with a random bar thrown in the mix lol. I really dug the first one on the emotinoal tip, and liked the use of multi's in that one. The last two really had good imagery and some lines that made me crack a smile. Flow was smooth, multi's were solid, and vocab was widely used. Nice shit Rugged.
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Post by Kause mc »

Hey man really enjoyed this piece. The tron drop is great lol.
My fav Lines are
The auxiliary was on, agility filtered me & the humility was gone//
It was my responsibility to kill those with no ability to respond//
think it's killing me, ya wrong, my artillery was my arms//
I was building me a bomb bout as big as the vicinity of 'Nam//

Id love to hear this recorded
Nice drop

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