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Demented Mind gets Serviced again!

Post by Kurse »

Yesterday I found a diss (actually an a weak attempt of a diss) done toward me. Well...it's been 24 hours and I've got a response to that shit. All I gotta say...is Demented Mind...before you take on a big dawg, you better get on my level first! So this one's to you BITCH! I'm not reponding to anymore disses coming from you if they're gonna be as weak, pathetic and shitty sounding like the other one.
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Post by Subsist »

the intro was amazing , the song was good though i wasnt so impressed for some reason , the beat was for 50 cent , and ur dissing a guy you dont really know that well so it wasnt such a personal battle. the "hip hop hip hop" doesnt work it was fucking gay and funny as hell man that was a good laugh i had.
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Post by Viral »

Subsist wrote:the intro was amazing , the song was good though i wasnt so impressed for some reason , the beat was for 50 cent , and ur dissing a guy you dont really know that well so it wasnt such a personal battle. the "hip hop hip hop" doesnt work it was fucking gay and funny as hell man that was a good laugh i had.
actually 50 cent took dat beat from another track...so yeah its not a "50 cent beat"..lol...
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Post by drunken jesus »

yeah the beats dead prez hip hop, you say it's 50 cent beat like its a bad thing lol one of the only good thing about 50 is his beats and hooks and if you've heard the original track to this beat you'd understand the hip hop part

you sound goofy in the intro all nasally lol flow was smooth lyrics were cool overall pretty dope
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by Street Pharmacist »

lol..this shit was garbage man fukn wipe my ass with that track corn ball tlkn bout flippin channels..thats all u good at,step ur dissing game up.
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Demented Mind wrote:lol..this shit was garbage man fukn wipe my ass with that track corn ball tlkn bout flippin channels..thats all u good at,step ur dissing game up.
Hey stupid...I dunno where you get off tellin me to step my "dissin game up" after releasing that heavy display of garbage you called a diss. All I can say is negro please...get off my nutz and get urself a hobby. Ur a wannabe emcee...not a real artist. Retire your $2.00 microphone (cuz thats definately what the quality sounded like) and go do sumthin else. Please Please Please Please Please don't embarass yourself by responding to that track. Your weak...your presence in a track is weak...you moan your verses like a .75 cent whore and you can't hang. Don't hate on the flippin channels thang son...cuz similiar to that...when people heard your weak-ass diss....they just clicked that off! Make yourself useful and go die or sumthin. Have a nice evening dick-head..
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Post by Invincible »

Superb production. However, the lyrics aren't really something to praise. Only bad thing too much talking..........over 2 minutes
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hahahaha!!!!!!!!! omg great track!!!! good work man!
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Post by Kurse »

Thanks for tha feedback Invincible...

...you too Lawgix. Good lookin out y'all.
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Post by complexity »

Diss tracks aren't exactly suppose to be complex writings. A few of the punchlines were a bit weak. Overall though. I thought the whole track was cool. Diss track of the month candidate without a doubt.
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haha @ have a nice evening dickhead at the end
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by Subsist »

its been alot more than 24 hours .. and can you put in the subject "diss to demented mind" instead of demented mind gets serviced again because we're the judges of that.
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Post by Kurse »

Actually it was 24 hours. I didn't know that he posted a diss on me until not yesterday mornin but the mornin before when I had posted up the song that Me, Viral and a couple of others guys did. So I wrote my shit, spit it out and mastered it to have it ready by the next mornin. So yea...as far as I'm involved, it was 24 hours. And the servicing thang...yea...he got burnt...hands down. I don't need other niggaz to tell me I scarred his ass in order for me to know it. You can decide on anything you want, but I'm always gonna be my largest critic, and it's gonna be my feelings about my track in the end of it all thats really gonna matter. So if you like my shit...like it. And if you don't...then you just don't. Bottom line.

And thank you Complexity...I'm definately more than humbled to hear that sumthin I played with is in consideration for Diss of the Month.
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Post by Viral »

Subsist wrote:its been alot more than 24 hours .. and can you put in the subject "diss to demented mind" instead of demented mind gets serviced again because we're the judges of that.

do urself a favor...stop actin like ur so special..wit ur lame ass we decide wat it is or isnt...u cant even get ur own tracks to sound good....wit ur horrible collabs wit terrorists maybe ur the real terror squad...regardless keep the bullshit up n ill make sure u dont come back here....no body likes u...we jst tolerate ur shit cuz ur commrades r getting bomb n we feel bad....NOT...jst shut da fuck up already
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Post by Subsist »

man seriously shut the fuck up all you;re doing is scaring newcomers out the site , hes just been here for one week and ur dissing the shit out of him. if i make a new song right now and make the subject "VIral got serviced again" i bet you my dick that you would abuse your admin powers to change the subject.
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