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A KILLAH keystyle

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Dont make me spend time...Look

He muss be motion sick, like good doctors it aint hard to notice Rip
I see the flow you spit but why go at Quix? Prolly cos he done smoked ya shit?
A K-O- then diss? I see, let the metal spray, leavin you were pebbles lay
I don’t want to settle / sway, but Killah soft like cereal, so I guess you special, K
Its like purposely, any verse he speaks is worse than these words he frees
It works for me, coz he juss another loopy character like a cursive E
I murder peeps so worthlessly, so even when you tryin’, you frontin
The advice is you suck kidd, got 2 votes in our battle but they were LION or somethin’
I’m supplyin the public wit the nicest assumptions that Killahs a bitch & hardly nice
While the spits I smartly write, make enough points on both ends to rival swizz army knifes
I’d be happy to admit the parts I like, but really, ya few sort of suck kidd
When his lines resemble a small penis, they too short to fuck with
My crew resorts to rough shit, fuck kidd, juss take a look at our bouts
Might as well put the toe tag in his throat the way he puts his foot in his mouth
You can be took into account, even tho the heat can spell seizures
Pardon Killahs Sentences yall, and I aint talkin bein’ released from jail neither
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Re: A KILLAH keystyle

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another nice diss jack.

see the flow you spit but why go at Quix? Prolly cos he done smoked ya shit?
A K-O- then diss? I see, let the metal spray, leavin you were pebbles lay
I don’t want to settle / sway, but Killah soft like cereal, so I guess you special, K


hahah ILL ^^


murder peeps so worthlessly, so even when you tryin’, you frontin
The advice is you suck kidd, got 2 votes in our battle but they were LION or somethin’


loved the personal but it was a lil choppy compared to your other bars

I’d be happy to admit the parts I like, but really, ya few sort of suck kidd
When his lines resemble a small penis, they too short to fuck with
My crew resorts to rough shit, fuck kidd, juss take a look at our bouts
Might as well put the toe tag in his throat the way he puts his foot in his mouth

This shit hit hard ^^ Liked this too fam
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Re: A KILLAH keystyle

Post by Kuhlerblynd »

Jack Da Rippa wrote:
He muss be motion sick, like good doctors it aint hard to notice Rip
I see the flow you spit but why go at Quix? Prolly cos he done smoked ya shit?

Couldve been a better opener with the punch, but def noticing the diss here...

A K-O- then diss? I see, let the metal spray, leavin you were pebbles lay
I don’t want to settle / sway, but Killah soft like cereal, so I guess you special, K

Good wordplay tied into the punch/personal, which are the best kind of punches IMO. Set up was pretty good too. Solid bar.

Its like purposely, any verse he speaks is worse than these words he frees
It works for me, coz he juss another loopy character like a cursive E

Universal, but really sick with the multi's. Punch wasnt too hard hitting IMO.

I murder peeps so worthlessly, so even when you tryin’, you frontin
The advice is you suck kidd, got 2 votes in our battle but they were LION or somethin’

Personal again. Good bar.

I’m supplyin the public wit the nicest assumptions that Killahs a bitch & hardly nice
While the spits I smartly write, make enough points on both ends to rival swizz army knifes

Universal, but definitely a sick punch.

I’d be happy to admit the parts I like, but really, ya few sort of suck kidd
When his lines resemble a small penis, they too short to fuck with

I Lol'd at this one. Universal again, but harder hitting for a uni punch.

My crew resorts to rough shit, fuck kidd, juss take a look at our bouts
Might as well put the toe tag in his throat the way he puts his foot in his mouth

This could be considered a personal, I see it as more universal. Good punchline.

You can be took into account, even tho the heat can spell seizures
Pardon Killahs Sentences yall, and I aint talkin bein’ released from jail neither

This was a dope closer. Personal, wordplay tied into the punch nicely. Well done.

Over all this was pretty good. Some universal shit, but came correct in most of those bars. The personals lines were definitely the highlights of the verse.
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