"Egos" (LivenLearn)

[Livenlearn]

Thanks For Listening, Leave Feedback, and Enjoy!

http://www.reverbnation.com/artist/song_details/6882757

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[Kau the Lion]

You rode the beat perfectly. Flow was solid throughout. Hook was alright. Not sure the vibe fit with the lyrics but it was done well none the less. I like the content, too. Overall a nice piece.

[Dynamiq]

pretty good stuff,i felt the flow. lyrics didnt match the concept of the track that much to me. but it still kind of came together.

keep it up man.

[Livenlearn]

Yea I def. feel what you are both saying in how content match the chorus, I think I had the idea that I was proven the track right but thru a contradiction of my own, sorta like the others have ego's, but I'm showing that have the same problem as I'm revealing that they do...I think I may have gotten off that path a lil maybe second verse or so, but I wrote this like a year ago was too lazy to fix so yea I agree with the feed, I appreciate the listen, def. glad for the feedback, and keep eye out for my other dropz...Also Dynamiq I might have collab for u and I so just keep ya eye for that...

[Audible Thought]

Whats funny is im working on this same beat right now, flawless tracks have some sick beats lol.

Anyways i always like ur tracks, your flow and delivery is always on point. What you can work on like kau and joel said is your lyrical content. I know its hard to stay on topic for a whole song believe me, im working on the same shit.