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If i wanted to be human could it be done in a wish?/
Na, i have no spirit, my emotions come from a chip/
bones not skeletal, the ore of metal was plentiful/
1000 times stronger than steel and 1000 times as flexible/
humans a weak thing, dont understand you, feel pain/
and have to do pointless tasks to survive each day/
so am i alive...my vast databanks cant debate this/
when an iron-clad will is the material im made with/
some lab components birthed me, no pain involved/
just a cpu with processors that had my brain installed/
an A.I voice automater that slightly gifted my speech/
so the latest techno magazine had pictures of me/
still theres a hole in my mind the way a soul is defined/
man-made, but if have dreams.. then i know im alive/
im hopeless to die, my vessel conquered mortality/
but I'm living the rest of my life drawn in formalities/

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Post by Kau the Lion »

Very creative. I always enjoy drops with a science fiction theme. I really liked these lines but I would probably reverse their order.
still theres a hole in my mind the way a soul is defined/
man-made, but if have dreams.. then i know im alive/
Multies were pretty good. Flow was there. Overall, this was a very enjoyable read. I wouldn't mind seeing this developed into a longer story drop. Ya know, three verses with a hook, even. Maybe we can turn this into a CI, collab. This is my kind of topic, ya know.
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Post by Orfadox »

Yeah man I liked this,the flow was tight, had some nice multies in there aswell but like kau said would be nice to see you add more to it

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C.I collab guys??? im about it. posting in the crew forum now.
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Post by QwarterZ »

This was nice as fuuuuuck....well for me it was
I always liked pieces with a nice switch up on ideas
it really helps the writer build up on his skill
nice multi's in your, your word usage was nice
I would've liked to see you take it further though
on some whole other shit it would've been greater
but you stopped :/ which is cool, either way
nice drop ssssssson
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