My Car (READ DESCRIPTION)

[lyrical1]

http://soundcloud.com/lyrical1/my-car

Not my beat. The music is from the song "My Dick" from the Harlod and Kumar 2 soundtrack. Me and friend/fam wrote the lyrics. I purposely made myself sound like I did at the start and a few lines throughout.

This was suppose to be some silly shit that we did so the part that dont make no sense arent suppose to. She didnt care to record her part right so I went ahead and did.

*I suggest listenin to the original song if u havent heard it before to understand why i rapped it the way i did.

[Deciple]

i have heard a lot of different versions of this track.. The Grouch did a track called "My Chick" which is just way funny... but you did this pretty good.. couple funny lines, would have sounded better with another artist.. this is a silly track tho for fun haha

[2xS]

I Agree With Deciple. You Did Have Sum Funny Lines, Such As The Saran Wrapped Windows, But To Me, It Just Got Repetitive Really Fast. I Think You Shoulda Threw In A Chorus Like The Original Did Just To Break Up The Song's Cycle. It Woulda Made It Sound Not As Repetitive, But Given The My Car Jokes A Break Ya Know? Quality WIse, You're Really Cleaning Up Now. Good Shit Tho, I LOL'd A Couple Times

[lyrical1]

yeah thats true, but like i said, I did it cuz the other person didnt wanna, I wanted to do another version wit a hook and someone else, but I just went on ahead and did what I had. I found the shit a week ago and we wrote it alomst a year ago, lol.

[Kause mc]

LOL nice one.. i gotta say i could just imagine this track played on a new fast n furious movie or sumthin. haha na pretty cool man but yeah a hook would hav been sweet but ive read ur comments so ive considerred that lol
funny dude keep it up

[lyrical1]

Good lookin out ^. I was hesitant to post it given how silly it was, but i figured what the hell. Been bsuy workin on some more "lyrical1" rhymes, so stayed tuned. I'll try to catch up wit all of yall post when I get a chance to listen to u guys songs.

Peace