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SHOTS FIRED OPEN COLLAB
Posted: Thu Jan 06, 2011 9:21 pm
by Slicka
OKAY I DID VERSE 1&2 BUT THE CHORUS AND VERSE 3 &4 WAS LEFT OPEN LEMME KNOW IF YOU WANT ON THIS.....THIS IS RUFF JUS A PREVIEW I STILL HAVE TO ADJUST THE LEVELS HOMMIES KNOW ITS LOUD TO LOUD LOL....THE FINAL VERSION WILL HAVE THE LEVELS RIGHT THO!
Re: SHOTS FIRED OPEN COLLAB
Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2011 3:09 pm
by Livenlearn
The beat is nice, your vocals could be mixed better, cuz your a lil loud...Your flow needs to be smoothed out, like stretch your words, don't add more words, just stretch them a lil so it doesn't sound like ur squeezing words in or that your ending lines awkwardly...your second verse was much better in terms of the criticism I just gave...Doesn't seems like a bad track just clean up a few things and it will be str8
Re: SHOTS FIRED OPEN COLLAB
Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 12:08 am
by - Mutual -
I like this shit man i may hop on this with you if nobody has hit you up yet i'm down dope beat and yeah we could make this a banger no doubt