Word Warrior

[lyrical1]

http://soundcloud.com/lyrical1/word-warrior

First track on my new digital studio, I still gotta learn the EQ and mixing features so it might not sound as great as it could.

Straight verse on this one

[Alvin]

Those are a lot of "yo", "yeah" on the intro. As for lyrics, your good man. Delivery is on point as well as flow... but the quality takes away from your talent. I listened to it through some ear bud headphones, and it hurt my ears. Your "p"'s are intense. Pop filters. Try raising some highs, and lowering the volume on your support tracks volume. I'm not talking down or disrespecting, but them are the obvious ones i noticed right off the bat. Nice drop irregardless, just quality needs adjustment.

[lyrical1]

No doubt the volume needs to be drop. When I compile these tracks im workin on into a cd ima adjust all that.

Thx for the feedback

[2xS]

Yeah, i'd Say Turn The Vocals Down A Little Bit. "T, P, F, And B" Pop Out Really Bad. Get Yourself A Nady pop Filter, Only 20 Dollars. Also, For Placement, Make Sure There's At Least 1 Foot Between You AndThe Mic, With The Filter Placed At 6-9 Inches Away From The Mic. Unless You're Good At COntrolling Your Vocals, Then This Will Probably Be The Best Placement For You. Quality Does SOund So Much Clearer Than Wat You've Made In The Past. I Likes. I Would Suggest A Collab In Tha Future, But I'd Have Ta really Step My Multi Game Up And My Vocab Just Ta Fuckin Match You Lol. Yet AGain, You Killed In Your Usual Categories. Really Nice Listen Bro

[lyrical1]

thx 2xS, I still got things I need to get for my music. Money is tight when u on probation, lol. But ill def look in to get that shit and working on heightenin the quality soon.