So Who Am I?

[lyrical1]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U5hYbO-Id6o

Better on soundcloud (lyrical1)

Quality still jacked.

[Deciple]

yeah quality really brings down a track, perfect example of that here.. the "Who Am I" in the beginning almost made me not listen to it haha.. but i stood in there and did... i like straight flow but this track is long.. you got that old school vibe in your verses.. last like 5-6 bars it seems like you run outta breath or you made your bars to long.. this is a decent track.. not bad

[lyrical1]

yeah this was one of my first, so it was a lot that could be improve wit flow and all that.

thx for the fdbk

[2xS]

STEALING MY TRACK NAME!!!!!!! No Bueno Lmao. J/k. . .Idk Man, This Is Extremely Long From my Looks, And I Agree, That "Who Am I" At The Beginning Is, A Huge Turn Off Lol. Your Flow Seems Rushed And Forced At Times, But You've Also Improved Considering This Is 3+ Years Old. "Passing Judgement On Book Covers. . ." Nice. Good Multi's, And Once Again Vocab Is There. I Really Don't Like The Hook. It Sounds Like Sumthing You'd Hear In A Horror Film. . .An Old 60-80's Horror Film Lol. 2nd Verse Seems Extremely Jumbled IMO, "Chuckie's Cheese Childs. . ." WTF?!?! Lol. 3rd Verse Starts Fuckin Crazy Until That Beat Breakdown, Again, Forced And Jumbled. This Track Has It's Ups N Downs, But It's So Old That I Can't Really GIve It A Full COmparison. It Was A Decent Listen For 6 Minutes, Entertaining, To Say The Least

[lyrical1]

no doubt, 2xS, ive to get better wit alot of that over time, preciate the feedback for sure