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decided to hop on fl studio for a change. i kinda dig this but its weird.
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I thought this was real nice. Lots of emotion in it, and if an equally emotional delivery was brought to the flow it would really make this track dope, especially if the flow was kinda rapid fire. It's got a good rhythm to it too, think it would carry a flow well. Well done...
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thanx bro. much appreciated. i felt it came across fitting to my mood but i CANT flow to this. i have more of a The Grouch style and this would require a super fast Eligh style. if you know anyone that can rip it i wanna put it on a mixtape but the instrumental is too plain. thanks for taking the time to feed this bro.
We must always and forever have hip-hops best interest at heart. We must allow ourselves to be critical of the music and culture so that ideas and beliefs that aren’t progressive can be eliminated and made unattractive to our youth. Our allegiance to Hip Hop has to be about more than romanticized ideas of misogyny, materialism, murder and mayhem. Instead our allegiances must be rooted in what we individually and collectively determine beneficial. The story of misogyny, materialism, murder and mayhem doesn’t end well. We’ve got proof. Doing what one believes is individually and collectively beneficial may allow for a better ending. Or better yet, no ending at all.
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The beginning rather scared me, kind of came in all of a sudden. It could be that I've been sitting in silence for a while lol. The drums are pretty dope, fucking double time though. Some techn9ne type of artist would tear this up. At some points it feels like the snare hits or rolls, whatever you call them, stumble on each other. Some nice strong, real acoustic with high hat clashing simultaneously would have been pretty dope for your solo's (where all the drums leave). Decent fade out, but i think the drums should have slowed as well instead of just lowering the volume on them. Favorite so far, just the drums were too fast for me... but don't let slow me discourage you, still dope. Keep em up.
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thanx man. i did this one. not toooooo sure what to think of it yet but im pretty happy with the turn out. i been on this almost depressing meodic kick lately and i been tryin to fight through it on reason, once i stopped trying to do that this came out. rather quickly if i must say. so idk. but thanx for listening and feeding bro. much love.
We must always and forever have hip-hops best interest at heart. We must allow ourselves to be critical of the music and culture so that ideas and beliefs that aren’t progressive can be eliminated and made unattractive to our youth. Our allegiance to Hip Hop has to be about more than romanticized ideas of misogyny, materialism, murder and mayhem. Instead our allegiances must be rooted in what we individually and collectively determine beneficial. The story of misogyny, materialism, murder and mayhem doesn’t end well. We’ve got proof. Doing what one believes is individually and collectively beneficial may allow for a better ending. Or better yet, no ending at all.
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