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lyrical1
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Quick Drop

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Microphone mythology and hip hop hypocrisy/
Need not question when the spit drops properly/
Both claim property, rap-style monopoly/
Hopin real lyricists don’t commit to robbery/
Cats wanna swear, but its doubtful is solemnly/
Playin games once fame shows gains and commodities/
Lavish material, the thought that would boggle me/
Knowin that death separates me from all of these/
Pictures, posters, images, depictions/
Mixture of flows and physical descriptions/
Feeding an ego, the center of addictions/
Immortal in the mind, dependent on the system/
Why risk this inquisitive style of linguistics by resorting to monotonous sounds to existence/
While I spit this discus that wizzes by your biscuit to unfortunately find that you’ve missed this/
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That whole first section reminds me of when I started getting into my multi's
really takes me back, this was good for what it was, didn't shine too much though
either way a nice little fun drop nonetheless...not much to say really.....keep writing brah!
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