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Dangerous Mind
Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2010 1:03 pm
by lyrical1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e526BXxYsG4
Old song, one fo the first i did, (2007)
Produced also
-- Tue Dec 14, 2010 10:06 pm --
of the first
Re: Dangerous Mind
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 2:28 am
by TheNobleOne
the quality is ass but you have some nice lyrical content. i would work on tightening up your flow though, it was off a little bit on a few parts, almost seemed rushed. the beat sounded pretty cool too. obviously this was pretty old so im only going off of that. keep doin ya thing man.
Re: Dangerous Mind
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2010 8:00 am
by lyrical1
no doubt the quality was garbage, and yeah my flow was kinda what ever on the beat at that time. I recorded it straight through damn near after recording the hook, so it can see how it sounded kinda rush.
Preciate the feedback playa